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The Overflowing Bra

Anonymous
TheClause2007@yahoo.com
The Red Stone Chapter 6
Finally found time to write again.
Next part will come Monday!
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Sexyjin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
In glad there are more people out there into weird transformation, especially turnung into a pile of boobs!
PurplePerry
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great, but since the chapters are getting higher you should consider including all previous chapters going forward.
Red stone fan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Yessss. Pure gold. I love how the addition of the new character has quickly blended into the story. Transformations are always a surprise and always hot. I only hope next story has just as much transformation and challenges as this one. Super creative ideas!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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