A young thief finds herself among the employ of Duke Fenrod, a powerful magic wielder and a man known for his fondness for top heavy women. How will she fit in, in this new world?
Authors note: My take on a fantasy romance tale. Not sure what direction I'd like to take the next part. Open to suggestions.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.83
- Technical: 4.92
Boobityboob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is a really great story, and youve got an excellent writing style. I cant wait to read the rest of it.
Svin
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good! Much better quality prose than one usually sees on this site. Would love to see more.
R
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
wow this one was so good, cant wait for more
Guest
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Really enjoyed this introduction and the world building you did. I'm hoping that you don't make our heroine too massive... I like the idea of her much more being a partner to the Duke in their relationship versus it being a masterservant one. A curvy thief would be interesting indeed.
The Duke
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, well written and good characters
wildcards
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Wonderful story looking forward to be reading the next part.
Sincerity
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It is hitting the notes of a period romance. I do appreciate the perspective. I would like some ff but that's purely for selfish reasons keep doing what's making you happy! Really enjoyed this a lot, looking forward to seeing more.
PomFan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good story, great descriptions. Agree that hourglass expansion is the way to go. Excited to see your take on butthip growth.
Shameless
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really strong work here if you're looking for suggestions, might I humbly request more of an hourglass route for the heroine? Something to make her more distinct from the other top heavy ladies. Looking forward to the next update.
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Reminds me of Jane Eyre in particular. Looking forward to seeing where this goes! I'm hoping big
NewFave
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderful story as always! I love the setting, the concept of the seal and the Duke have his moments of softness really lend to the idea that he could have feelings. I will say, I love your descriptions of growth, so the growth overnight did kinda leave me wanting more, but your overall description of size is great as usual. I'd love to see how it blossoms from here, maybe some MPG added to the mix, maybe some real time growth. Those would be my only critiques
SomeGuy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely loved it. Thanks so much! Great, great story. Love the setup, the characters, the dynamic. Real chemistry between them too. Hope she gets huge and becomes his fave.
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