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The Overflowing Bra

Thresher
The Well
This is my version of a story from a long time ago. That story started my love of BE. Let me know what you think.
Average Scores:
 THEM
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Not flawless, but well above average. You should post more stories. 
 MrEcks
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
No issues reading at all and a good story.
 D
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I had no issues reading this. Good story.
 Daichi
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
Completely unreadable mess due to the use of  in between ever letter and space.  Would be able to review proper if it weren't a fucking mess
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