TheClause2007@yahoo.com
Mia meets an old woman who gives her a mysterious wooden box inside she, and her roommate and best friend Sophie, find a magical red stone that grants wishes that let them change the others body in any sexually fantastic way they can think off. A lot of trust is asked of them though since the only one who can undo a wish is the one who made it.
Edit: this contains part 1 & 2, i made some corrections to the first part since the grammar was atrocious. It still is terrible, but hopefully not as bad.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.60
- Characters: 3.80
- Technical: 3.80
Red stone fan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
My god these can come out fast enough. Literally hitting all the tropes, every fetish, all the way. Seriously in literal anticipation for red stone 3. I can't wait to find out how they progress. Obviously some revenge is warranted but how? Seriously no criticism and only praise. Please keep up the good work!
bobGrimer
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Hot despite the grammatical errors. I felt the quick pace of the changes suited the story, I just wished there was more.
Johnmick
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Random reader steve
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It's was alright. Every transformation felt fast and then just over with. I kinda wanted for fun with each one but oh well. Gave off blue flame vibes
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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