The story continues! In this chapter, Jason brings Celina to the ship, we find out how big Venus grows from drinking the 5-gallon shake, and much more! Things are starting to ramp up as there is some serious growth in this chapter which I hope you guys enjoy. As always, make sure to rate my story with your feedback if you want more. And if you want to support me, follow me over at deviant art @OppaiDragonWrites.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.00
Wattman
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
cman
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This is really getting good! Love the greed. Looking forward to seeing where it goes
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