TheClause2007@yahoo.com
Mia meets an old woman who gives her a mysterious wooden box inside she, and her roommate and best friend Sophie, find a magical red stone that grants wishes that let them change the others body in any sexually fantastic way they can think off. A lot of trust is asked of them though since the only one who can undo a wish is the one who made it.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 3.33
RingedShaft
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Love the one girl transformed with multiple boobs and her predicament. Tentacles on the other I can past it. Grammar and flow need some work, but over I really like it. Really looking forward to the next story to find out what happens to the multiple boobs girl and her plans
Genyun
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Good concept, but you really need to work on your punctuation and proofreading. Overall I enjoyed it.
WiseWhale21
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Really enjoyed it! Great premise and fun start! I really hope you keep going, I would be so excited to keep reading!
Similarly, I also found some new kinks through this haha.
Jibjug
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic plot I didn't know what to expect next. Wildly activated kinks I didn't know I had. 55 would read again.
Doobdorf
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
It's a fun story with a nice dynamic of pranking and payback... looking forward for the next chapters.
Mango
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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