Alex and Mia meet a mysterious shopkeeper at a local market. She gives them a pair of rings of growth, which allow the wearer to alter the body of the other.
Contains breast & ass expansion, hourglass expansion, attribute theft.
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Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.75
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.50
Doobdorf
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Short and sweet story, ate it all up so fast haha, by itself IMO felt it a bit short but still good. Left me wanting to read even more about Alex, Mia and Melody.
MrEcks
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
As stated by others, very short. My impression is that where the story ended would normally be the end of the first act.
lard
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very hot and lots of good build up but I agree it just left me wanting more. I hope you'll do a part 2! I especially appreciate the pleasurable sensation of the transformations
wildcards
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
The start of this story got me rather eager to read more, the events in the store alone was a great setup. But the end neared way to quickly and felt, well...Ending too early. This story setup has soo much potential to involve and expand in a much bigger story.
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