The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

HuskArchon
Dark_princeof_chaos@Yahoo.com
Sienna
A trio of hyperpregnant sorority girls summon a bubbly and enormous otherworldly being in order to gain an edge in a local fertility contest. 
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 Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
I agree that this story feels like the first chapter of a longer story. There was not much focus on the BE in this story. I would have liked a bit more description on the size of the growths. 
 Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Big pregnant bloated fun. Not super BEfocused, although there is some there. Feels like the first chapter of a longer work.
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