The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

milkman11
Blossoming Bronwyn
A young woman goes for a late walk, only to quickly regret it when she encounters a peculiar plant.

NOTE: the pregnancy element is not very significant and only shows up at the end. I only tagged it as pregnancy so it would be excluded if you exclude the pregnancy tag when searching.
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Android
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Can't open on android.
Geoffk
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
The file isn't empty, but it's confusing.  The zip contains a directory with no name.  Inside the directory is the file.  You can't see the unnamed directory in Windows explorer, but 7Zip will let you open it and copy the file.  
As for the story itself, it's very short.  There's BE and a sort of plantbased tenticle porn.  I didn't really do a lot for me.
OdysseusII
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
File is empty
anon
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Rated with 3's across as it may just be my machine but the zip file is presenting as empty to me on my Windows 10 PC.
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