Emily has always been the quiet one, the person in the background who never quite fit in. Diagnosed with scoliosis as a child, she's spent most of her life in and out of hospitals, watching as her peers enjoyed their youth from afar. All of that is supposed to change when she finally gets her surgery. But when a mix-up leaves her with breast implants instead, Emily's life changes in completely different ways.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.38
- BE: 3.38
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.75
amanDDa
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like the development here.
and that the change was out of her control.
and that eventually she takes control
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Overall, very well done! I do have to agree with the consensus on characters other than Emily, however, in the fact that they are kinda annoying. I know that's the point of most of the supporting cast though, which is why I'm still giving a 45 overall. Would love to see more!
More
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Milkman1969
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A good start. Keep writing! Rachel should end up getting implants, or maybe inducing lactation to deal with her jealousy.
THEM
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent setup, I must have more!
Torque
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
It's well written, but has almost nothing so far for BE, and the majority of characters besides the protagonist are insufferable. I get that that's the theme, but there isn't anything really juicy to offset it yet. Their reaction to 300cc is a little over the top, since that's barely a big B cup if starting from flat.
Double
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Seeing as this is part 1, it is my hope that future chapters include further breast augmentation, ultimately to a gargantuan size whilst retaining her otherwise petite figure. Please include discussion of volume in cc's per breast implants, struggles and challenges due to her increasing size, but mostly her teasing others erotically about what she has done, and what she shall continue to do.
Great premise and this is sorelylacking genre. Please do continue!
OdysseusII
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Generally enjoying it. Would love some more BE description, especially with sizes and stuff like that. Also, the strawman feminist was a bit much, reads more like one of those fantasies the worst people on reddit make up. Not a particularly realistic character. But overall, a good first part
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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