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The Overflowing Bra

Keliadom
Jala's Never-Ending Macromastia
In this 20 pages novella, follow the story of Francisca PĂ©rez, sent to catalog curious rumors of a woman who's breasts have been growing constantly for the past two decades. As she discovers a being of immense proportions, Francisca begins to ponder if there could be a link between the vision she witnesses and the world wide, ever increasing seismic tremors. Jala Shirazi, shackled by her growing breasts, counts the tale.

Includes art by ArchieWilliamMH & MonsieurRobot
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Spectacular descriptions of both planetary size  unimaginable sensation.
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