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The Ballad of Maggie Part IV
It's been a long time, but here is the fourth part of The Ballad of Maggie in which Maggie and her friends face consequences for irresponsibility and gather bits of knowledge that something more is amiss than their own erotic shenanigans.
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maj
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great story, hope to see it finished someday. I do wish it had a bit more of the randomking weirdness I enjoy, and I'm not super into the dominatrix stuff but good overall and would love to have the main plot finished.
Bubs
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I was excited to see this story updated after seven years, but was disappointed to discover that there is no expansion in this story. The dominatrix sex was fine, but I come to this site to see boobs get bigger, along with other changes. 
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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