Gloria, a middle-aged divorcee, decides to hit the gym to try and meet a new man. What she gets is much, much more.
Author's Note: First attempt at a Female Muscle Growth story (That is the main focus here, though there is some standard BE). Not as familiar with this material type so if it doesn't hit the right notes, I apologize. Feedback as always is appreciated.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.67
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.33
- Technical: 3.33
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Nice. Could've used a little more depth to it, but overall it didn't detract from the story very much. My only other lament is that she didn't get big enough to qualify for the GTS rating.
Trogdor297
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Before anyone dings me on it, I did switch one of the names during editing, and I missed some of them in the final draft.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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