The finale of Skylers saga. Frustrated by the failure of the second pill to achieve results, Skyler and Joy come up with a plan to achieve her growth dreams.
Authors note: Hope you enjoy the final chapter, thanks for all the feedback. As I've mentioned in the past If you wish to chat or discuss story ideas please feel free to DM my reddit account (same user name). Cheers!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.60
- BE: 3.60
- Characters: 4.20
- Technical: 4.60
Bubs
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I have a pet peeve about stories with the science tag, or which claim that all this growth comes from a pill, and then have breasts grow to impossible sizes instantly. Where is the mass coming from? Is the pill causing her to gain 1000 pounds of breast flesh from the aether or a parallel universe? If she's going to gain so much so quickly, at least call it magic. Other than that the story is ok. I liked the earlier chapters better where she started with a relatively smaller change and explored how it impacted her life. So hot. This one she just becomes insanely huge instantly. Not as fun.
Chargerse
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked this. I wish there were a little more of her and Lily interacting post final growth.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Fun story. The sizes got too big for my personal tastes, but you're not writing for me. I look forward to you're next story.
Torque
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Love the concept, and there's a lot of potential for spinoffs. It felt like the growth and descriptions could have used a little more detail, and the ending felt a little rushed, but overall it was good.
OdysseusII
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Overall I enjoyed this, glad to see you responding to the criticisms. I wish the expansion had more descriptiveness, and some of the characters could have been fleshed out more, but overall, very enjoyable.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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