The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Trogdor297
The Worthy Suitor
Rob wants nothing but to marry his goddess of a girlfriend.  He'll just have to prove to her family that he's worthy, by whatever means necessary.
Authors note:  Hello, sorry for the long absence, life gets in the way sometimes.  Hope you enjoy my first story in awhile.  Just an FYI the major focus of this one is cock growth (there's still lots of BE of course) so if that's not your thing be advised.  Cheers!
Average Scores:

A person
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
The tags and description neglected to mention this was futa. 
Cyberendowed
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very solidly assembled story that gets great growth in a framework of actual narrative. Very nicely done!
HyperpenisFan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved it! Im glad you're back! We need more hyper PE stories  and this one had lots of PE and BE! 
Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
The BE descriptions were good, and having him grow while she did was nice. Everything got too big at the end, though. I wonder why they kept trying to please the mom, when she plainly had no intention of submitting.
DrKnow
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love your work. So happy to see you writing again!
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm so glad you're still writing!  

I think your stories are absolutely some of the best in the genre.  Not just interesting, well written ideas, but you do such a great job of hitting the right level of overindulgence and greed.  I regularly read through your older stories, and am happy to add this one to the list!
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