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The Overflowing Bra

Ash
Rise of a New Order
The sultry sorceress Khadila commands an army of loyal men, any one of whom would willingly
give their lives in service of their buxom mistress. Despite their efforts, she is finally brought down by a powerful brotherhood of celibate knights carrying out their holy vows to eradicate evil.
Although Richard Gallfrey and his comrades ride away, seemingly victorious, not all is as it seems, as Khadila’s final spell is about to change Richard’s life forever.
This is a tale filled to the brim with magical transformations, mental corruptions, breasts swelling with sexual magic, of cocks filled with powerful seed. Read on to discover from whence this wanton witch derives her power, and what debauched scheme the sex-fuelled mage has hatched
from beyond the grave upon these devout knights.
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deuxanges
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good work! Well executed technically, story has good pace and writing is free from typos. I am not into MF TG but this was actually quite good. Would have liked more BE descriptions. Hoping you write a sequel with even bigger boobs! 
ktc
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It's first person and TG centric. Not bad traits, but if you are not into mf tg it makes it difficult to enjoy much.
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