Tale of four young girls who while on a summer break in France, stumble across a mysterious ancient object which will change all of their lives forever. No spoilers ...except to say that there are many expansions and twists in the tale. First story in over ten years - hope that you enjoy it.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.07
- BE: 4.07
- Characters: 3.79
- Technical: 3.36
HOT
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Shaken Stirred
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A fun read. Liked the epilogue.
walkingonadream
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
One of the best stories Ive read in the genre. Thought the numerous growth transformations were superb. Going searching for similar stories now.
NuffSaid
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Slow build but really got into it towards end.
Eurotrash11
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great story. Good to see you return to writing. Hoping for more.
starspangled
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really liked the numerous transformations. Keen to read more of this style of writing.
burningfield
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like the content of young girls becoming busty giantessover 7ft who tower over anyone' through age progression and rapid growth. However, few writers write such a story. I'm so happy to read my favorite story after a long time. It's a shame you wrote it again after 10 years. I'd appreciate it if you could post more stories like this.
CheekyCat05
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Enjoyed the growth and age progression throughout, reading as someone in their late teens. Hoping for more like this.
chaos
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Really enjoyed the story. Sucker for Age transformation though.
Overflowing Throwaway
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Why did they have to be underage?
whodatnow
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Really enjoyed it. Didnt mind high school characters in story lots of adult transformations as well.
OdysseusII
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Thank you, LT, for the warning
LT
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Fun story, but really could have done without the underaged characters.
Boo Blover
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved the story, especially the character development and their multiple transformations. Wasnt initially sure where the preamble was going but it all very much made sense in the end. Welcome back to writing great work!
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