Rebecca shows up for a modeling gig expecting to spend a couple hours in a bridal dress and an unusually high modeling fee.
What she gets may be considerably more than she expected.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 2.50
- Technical: 4.00
Lily Bunny
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
I have been a big fan of your stories for a very long time, and when I saw you finally posted a new story, I got excited. You make some of the hottest reads on this whole site, but sadly this one was kind of lacking. Very little setup, vague characters and premise and very little pay off, the discription of the growth was also a bit lacking too. I know you have the ability to make, even the shorest of stories amazingly hot, so I am stilll waiting with bated breath for your next story. Until then though, this, sadly, was not one of your better works.
Yup
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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