A new mother is away from her baby on a road trip when snow leaves her and her husband stranded. Unfortunately, she's got a genetic disposition to heavy lactation. Her milk is surging, her pump is out of batteries, and she's not sure how much more she can take! One thing is for sure: neither of them will be going hungry.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 4.50
WriterWright
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Good expansions but narratively unsatisfying. Could just be the format, but every one left me with this feeling of ...okay? And now what?! You've just gotten to the good part!
bobGrimer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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