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Madam Materia
A Violet for a Rose
A Madam Materia commission. Two roommates, one with an all consuming affection for the other, willing to do what it takes for her heart, and her eye. Violet has studied the occult for some time now, and knows her way around the mystic arts that lie just below the mundane. When she finds a spell to alter herself, she thinks it's just what she needs to finally win the love of her life, only for things to not go exactly to plan.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
High quality, likeable characters. A quick dommy teacherpet dynamic I definitely enjoyed.
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