The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Trogdor297
The Secretary
Tim's got a new a job with a new secretary.  Too bad she's flat...or is she?


Thanks for those who provided feedback on my first story. I Would appreciate the same courtesy for this one! 
Average Scores:
 cman
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
Really nice!  Good description of growth, fun innuendos.  I would have enjoyed more time spent with the two of them having sex, and of course, to find out what happens after the epilogue   A few typos mostly character names that were lowercase, but otherwise great!
 MeatBadger
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Great job!
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