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The Overflowing Bra

Logomancer
Three Cheers
Megan has her eye on the local baker. And with the help of a magic pill and some pastries, she's going to get his undivided attention.
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Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Would've liked if a little more time was spent before the ending, but as far as Bimbo and Feederfetish stories goes, this was the most enjoyable of all the ones I read in the last two decades as someone who is generally turned off by both of those fetishes. The main characters are interesting, and the heroine is cute. Good work!
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