The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Max
maxwriter@gmail.com
What the Heart Desires
Two roommates got the magical Dictaphone and will use it to change their lives, and relationship, for the better.

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Boris
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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