A college girl gets a visit from her future self, who gives her some pills that will help her make better use of her excess calories.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.17
- Characters: 3.83
- Technical: 4.67
Anonymous Coward
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I want this made into a sixpart Amazon Prime series but with more exploration of the physical changes.
Cadfael
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
A cute story, with a great concept. However, I didn't get much out of this, as the story was very short, and the breast expansion, despite ostensibly being the focus, isn't very descriptive, and is only there for the last two pages. As a result, i didn't find it very exciting. I've gotten more enjoyment from your other stories.
Dewdster
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very good story, quite the page turner. It's a little on the short side but still very much worth your time.
AC
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A good simple story, but it could stand to spend some more time fleshing out both the characters and the growth process.
reviewer
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
The premise is amazing, execution below average.
RedGhost
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Quite an amusing story with a funny twist at the end. Certainly worth reading.
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