The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

a-spooky-ghost
Of Elves and Milk
Tilly the dwarven handmaiden is jealous of elven noble Solana's towering stature. Will a magic scroll tip the balance in Tilly's favor?
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JDINIHFIJDJ
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Their's a dickless loser going around rating everything bad because mommy doesn't love him. Just ignore it
y2k2
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
i dunno waht the other commenter was talking about or if they read the wrong story but this was easily one of my favorite stories on the site. please tell me theres gonna be a sequel!!
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Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
I did not understand this. Maybe I didn't pay attention enough but I think this is not too good. Fits the site though
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