My first attempt trying anything like this, please let me know what you think - and what I can do to improve!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 3.75
- Technical: 3.75
Prgnx1
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Love this story and concept. Please continue it! And shoot the guy too!
morefriction
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This was a really enjoyable first entry. I'd love to read a part two!
Bunny
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Very interested in the story arc and for future chapters. A few grammar issues, but a great story makes those kinds of things trivial in my book but there are folks who will feel pretty passionate about those errors.
Alyzero
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I thought it was solid, if a little cut off at the end. I found Heather to be distractingly unlikeable. I think you got the point across of her personality early on and then it sort of felt repetitive as the story continued. Overall a good start!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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