The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Max
maxwriter@gmail.com
Ten Lines
Rebecca got into a website that allowed her write 10 statements that can help her improve her body by comparing herself to others. These lines can change reality making them true. With such power at her hands, what she will do, specially if she want to mess up with her hubby.

Author note: Many thanks to Codexdrinker and MoreFriction for their ideas and help in editing this story.
Average Scores:
 Wokod
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Simply amazing read it!
 Boris
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Really glad to read you again ! Great story as always 
 Apple
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Amazing story. Love it.
 rando
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3 
a bit too long for its own good, but good stuff anyhow
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