Things are really flowing now – The Bride, The Groom, and the Maid of Honor cant take the pressure much longer. Everyone needs some relief – but isnt there always someone who insists on going first?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.00
aylamb
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Despite the scoring, this and the other chapters get a full recommendation. The only truly critical piece of feedback I'll give is that the Script style dialog isn't very fun to read. I hope to see more from the author with a more robust narrative voice
Awrg
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Bro, keep going, looks great
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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