In this chapter, the scene begins to unfold in earnest. It’s smaller than chapter one, but way more stuffed with cream filling. Enjoy this soon-to-be Bride and Groom as they enjoy their swollen Maid of Honor together after the rehearsal dinner! - Glass
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 5.00
Awrg
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Awesome writing but slow action or short chapters. I will love it to be longer.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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