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The Overflowing Bra

HarmonyMotion
Hannah Expandah
Flat yet beautiful Hannah Michaels has always been envious of the girls with larger busts than herself, taking offense from the smallest slight.

All that changes, and then some, when she goes in for a shady, experimental cosmetic surgery...
Average Scores:
 canana
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
the 'evilunlikable' character being the one that grows is hot as fuck
 Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Is the main character likable? Nope.
Does it make sense? Nope.
Is it hot as hell? Yep! 
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