Officer Ruby Granger is supposed to keep an eye out for suspiciously milky wedding guests. When one walks into her, she's surprised to find that it's her ex-girlfriend.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.75
Thaenn
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love it. Can't wait for more!
PS
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Ambles along at an incredibly slow pace. It was a slog to get through.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hot as fuck. Please let there be more!
Alyzero
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really, really liked the story. There was a lot of exposition, which I mostly enjoyed but felt took the focus off the actual BE, even though the overall theme is obviously BE. It's a tricky balance to achieve a compelling story along with satisfying BE scenes, and you mostly pull it off.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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