The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bigby Wolfe
Six Scary Stories of HalloBEen
Six scary stories designed to frighten or, if not frighten, then at least cause a thrill. Haunted hotel rooms, ghosts, cursed VHS tapes, aliens, oh my. Includes a bit of body horror and some blood, too.
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Oxriff
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Are you doing a sequel of Venus???
Kanodin
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Is soft horror a thing? The BE and sex stuff was almost laconic, but I suppose it was appropriate for such short stories. Characters were appropriate for the horror genre but the horror was tame. In terms of the horroremotion experience, I would recommend amping up the fear experience and leave the disgust levels as is. 
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