The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Max
maxwriter@gmail.com
Fortune Exchange
Two roommates totally opposite. One succesful and sexy, the other an underdog and not so attractive. One desires what the other has. Can a fortune cookie change their fates? 

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EveTheTitQueen
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Loved your story, just like most of your stories. Would have loved if Eve had in fact become a whore in the end. Also if she continued stealing more and more breast size and features from her other friend Cecilia. 
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