The Overflowing Bra

Oh god, oh MY GOD! very very good story. I can't wait for her to grow and be greedy, she is already so big and so addicted.Hope she will enjoy being the biggest in her office, being so much bigger than others.

Superb. Great theme to start with, excellent writing, great characterization. I really want to see much more of this. This is GOOD PROSE, a pleasure to read. It could use a great deal more breast description and particularly the growth description, but I have every hope that's on the way. In particular, just large is a little feeble for a work of this quality and thoughtfulness. Even cup size doesn't tell the reader much. It would greatly increase the alreadyhigh level of this, to add meaningful description of the sizeproportionsweightextentbehavior of largevery largehuge breasts.

Thank you for a terrific read  welcome back, hope you are here for a good long time.

Agree with the other comment. Love that you have decided to write again and this was a good introductory chapter. Interesting story and well paced. Not much BE but hoping for more in the next instalment.

Positive Feedback is an absolute CLASSIC and a major influence on me. It's an easy pick Top 5 all time story. 

Let's get this out of the way RD is excellent, and flawlessly executed.

On the read of this too short! setup chapter  you've got chops, that's for sure. I went back after reading this and skimmed through bits of Positive Feedback again, and even though the settings and tone are different what comes through is that you've gotten even better as a writer in 17 years.

If forced to say what it is I'd put it down to confidence. RD takes less words to say what is happening, and in writerly parlance that's called lean prose, which is supposed to be the ideal. This is ideal technical capability. You can write, okay?

Character delineation is also excellent. Even though there's not much action and its a two shot scene for this chapter, the differences between two women characters are clear. If you have more room to maneuver in the next chapter it would be nice to see them do stuff and behave in way that shows sharp contrast between their identities and motivations. That seems to be what you're setting up and already pulling off, which is excellent.

BE Description could be better, but for what's there and what it promises it's pretty great. There are lots of different opinions on what good BE description means but I don't think it matters and its not a big deal. If the tits get bigger you've got a built in audience dude.

Which segues into, you need to do more of this. Don't take another 17 years. As silly and horny as all this shit is sometimes, occasionally we get a piece of real writing. Occasionally it rises above the genre or the wank material to be something greater. A real story that hits right between the eyes. That's what Positive Feedback did. That's talent.

Believe me when I say there are people out there more than just me who remember what you wrote two decades later. Ask yourself how many millions of professional writers can actually say that? 

You've tested the concept with this audience. It works, you've got something amazingly great here. Just write it out now. Let's really see what you've got.

Loved this story, and Im glad to see it is set in the same universe as your previous work! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Really liked this one! The slow, society wide growth is great. Good banter between characters. Excited to see where this is going