The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

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Sorority Circle
Lisa has deja vu during her first day at a sorority.
Average Scores:
 HOT
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Well writing, greatly executed
 anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
There's what feels like a bit of a cheat halfway through to really start things down a path of escalating debauchery, but overall it's an enjoyable story.
 Bewb
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4 
I loved the time loopvery cool structure. 
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