The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Swogrider
r1998rrhof95@yahoo.com
Party Favors (Chapters 4, 5, 6)
The deeper into the mansion they go, the stranger things seem to get!
Average Scores:

majmage
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great Swog story, hoping for more!
00001
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
1010 got hooked on Jobongos. Every story is better. 
Pehdalfhalfj
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Every story is better than the last. Transformations are perfect, kinda crazy but still focused on the sensations and experiences. After the private intimacy of Jobongos this is a fun romp. I look forward to the climax. I also hope for a quiet intimate story after this series. 
Tbone
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
MOAR PLZ!
Platy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
TWO SWOGRIDER POSTS IN ONE WEEK? It's a goddamn miracle!
Chrono
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very impressive! only the occaisional punctuation mistake, but nothing that ruined the experience. hope to see more soon!
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