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Suzy visits an old lady looking for a way to make herself prettier. She is shown transfer spell with complicated rules to fulfill for it to work without getting punished. Still, Suzy takes it feeling confident that she could use the rules on her favor and make the best of it.
This story was a comission from Burningfield.
My native language isn't english, so apologies for the grammar and spelling errors present in the story
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Kushlava
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Already getting excited when I see there's a new story from you. Before I even start reading.
Just love the whole attribute theft thing, the way you describe.
Although in this one there's a bit too much muscle stuff going on for me, it still was wonderful reading it.
Boris
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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