Wendy's whole family got tits, but she didn't. Maybe she can remedy that with some medicine-- as long as she follows the instructions, that is.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 5.00
OdysseusII
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Generally enjoyed it, but it was very short. And I really wished there was a lot more description of the BE. Also, fyi, E cups are closer to average than not. Not massive by any sense
deuxanges
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Interesting premise and character but IMHO the style of writing describing the BE was too rushed. The story ended a bit prematurely and it felt like a teaser rather than a full story. I wonder if this is just the set up for the rest of the story. The technical quality was good, didn't notice any typos of grammatical errors.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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