This is my first story at all, so don't be too harsh. Thanks for your understanding, pleasant reading)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.82
- BE: 1.73
- Characters: 1.91
- Technical: 1.64
ihhb
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
ThickusDickus
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Not even going to bother trying to read a translation
go fuck yourself for posting an English title on a russian story.
Git gud you idiot
bobGrimer
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
After putting it through Google Translate I think I get the gist of it. It seems kinda rushed, the BE is short and descriptions are merely cup sizes. Being a part one there's hopefully more to come with some improvement, the breast sizes didn't get very large. I'm very interested in seeing some of those other tags come into play. Hard to gauge the technical quality when it's not in a language I understand and the characters are a bit flat pun unintended but that's an issue of the length more than anything I think. It's not bad for a first story. Just have to resubmit in English. Pretty sure that's a rule here.
youhaveitinspades
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
It opens with 7zip, but the story is in Russian. Readable if run through google translate. Even then not great, mild height growth, BE, lactation, FF incest.
Andrew
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Re upload story
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
When you open the zip. There nothing there.
Cantreadstory
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Should state the language in the description
TheYoYo
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Link is broken, id love to read your story if you fix the link
Wissen
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
Well, it's technically in Russian, but looks like a text MTL from English.
bloodhand
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It's in russian... That should probably be in the description
Fleh
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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