The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Max
maxwriter@gmail.com
Boob Heist
A busty detective investigates the cases of two of her friends who had mysteriously lost their breasts. She seeks the aid of her also busty friend who is the only witness. The detective must rush to find the responsable behind this before her friend will be next, or worse, herself.

A fair warning, this story is based on the previous feedbacks, so it's a bit darker than my usual stories 
 
My native language isn't english, so apologies for the grammar and spelling errors present in the story.

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More attribute theft!
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Deliciously dark
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