The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Max
maxwriter@gmail.com
Succubus Allure
Two girls got into a fraternity at night ready to feed on men desires and use those to improve themselves and become more than they could possible imagine.

My native language isn't english, so apologies for the grammar and spelling errors present in the story.

Thanks for all the feedback shared in my previous stories. It's well appreciated.
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FQ
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great history, one of the best
burningfield
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really respect your effort for more attribute stories over decades.

These days it seems your heroins only gets merits, without victims. I would rather want to see crying and misery of victims who deserve or not 
Boris
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Just amazing !
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