The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Steve Palmer
Unknown
The Lab
This is my first story in many years.
Average Scores:

Abox
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Good character depth, but not really smut unless you count everyone having arbitrarily huge but otherwise nondescript tits.
DeadJackalope
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Your work is astonishingly good. Thank you so much for sharing it with the world.
Astrochix
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great to see you back!
NakNak90
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The Return Of The King.
Guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hot Damn, Welcome Back! Great to see the legend has returned!
XXX
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
fantastic. I hope that you will write more again. i would have liked to read more of janet and scarlett, but maybe more of them in the next story.
S90
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The man, the myth, the legend... Steve Palmer has returned, and better than ever! I'm happy beyond words to see your return, and with this fantastic tale, you've outdone yourself again.

Can't wait to see what you bring to the table next time!
Tarquin
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the giants of the field returns! And nice whateverhappenedto Janet. Thank you, boss! Breast description could use more detail, but a nice story and a fun read. I would LOVE to see a story doing justice to the mammoth Scarlett. And the variety of support devices she and her 250pound mammaries require. Helpful hint Albinos can't have blue eyes. An albino's eyes are always pink. The condition unfortunately comes with a lot of health problems, in particular some pretty severe vision issues. 
MeggaGlannzFan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hi Steve, I have been a huge fan of Megga Glannz ever since the first comics came out in the late 90s. We actually exchanged a couple of emails in the early 2000s when I inquired about the lost adventures, which you then rereleased. I'm responsible for the new series of comics about her on DeviantArt, though to be honest with you, I don't think I ever managed to capture the spirit of the original. I am now toying with the idea of commissioning some new cartoons about her, probably just singleimage ones rather than strips. I would love to run my thoughts by you, and I'm curious whether you can remember any storylines you had planned to do but didn't have a chance to before Paul Forrest's passing. Would be great to hear from you. My email is MeggaGlannzFangmail.com, or you can message me at MeggaGlannzComics on DeviantArt.
Aethiop
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Welcome back. Quality taletelling at its best. 
Shulk
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
As others have said it's always nice to see experienced authors return.  Stories like yours have been the bases and inspiration for many future writers over the years.  Much appreciation my friend.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You've still got it, my friend!
zed
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The return of a legend! Thank you for posting yet another great story!
Joanne
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love enourmous breast I wouldnt mind working with you to make a story I'm on deviantart JoannesMassiveBosom
Firebeard
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You are a legend bro. I never expected to be given the pleasure of reading one of your stories again.
Chargerse
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great to know you still write!!! Loved it!!
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