Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.67
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
etic
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
With the small number of stories youve published, youve already become one of my favorite writers on the site. I especially love the reality shift aspect of your stories, which is one of my favorite attributes in BE stories. Keep it up!
Alyzero
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Really solid, I think it's interesting how you incorporated the feedback from your first work posted and now have two nice stories on this site. This one also had a vibe where she was more in control, and I thought the feel of the story had a nice haunted but not horror vibe.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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