The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

E. N. Dowd
The Domes of Callantha, chapter 7
At Port Selkie, Tani is looking for passage out of the country. She can't pay the fare, but some things are more valuable than money... and there just happens to be this very interesting game in town.
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Varchild
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loving this series.  Great to see a big fantasy Expansion epic! eagerly awaiting more!
Firebeard
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another solid addition. 
Revealer
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Interesting concepts to introduce additional combinations of BE. The effort to invent must have been a larger one, interested to see if it will return during following chapters.
TheSecondSon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The world building is really good in this one I loved how you made a breast expansion game, I thought that was really well done, and adding to the magical elements with the magical card deck was a nice touch. Looking forward to more!
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