As Countess Elira is finding out, sometimes breast magic is just enough to get you into trouble. Getting you out takes something a whole lot bigger. More to come!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 3.33
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
TheSecondSon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really excited to see more of Elira's magic, and very happy that the two main characters are interacting more now. Great work!
Firebeard
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Liking the characters and excited for more worldbuilding
deuxanges
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Not so much BE or descriptions of boobs in this chapter, but I am enjoying the progression of the story nonetheless. I am looking forward to the negotiations between Clay and Countess Elira about who should be in charge and what happens when their magic interacts!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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