Tani has skipped town, taking her curse with her in search of stronger magic. Nella knows which way she went, and will lead Clay to her... for a suitably large price.
Still plenty more to come, as long as the comments are favorable!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.20
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
TheSecondSon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great Work! The plot is going incredibly well, and the cliffhanger is excellent. Not only did you create suspense, I love that the two main characters so far are now getting connected in a way that was unclear would happen before, which is great to see. Loving the character development. Keep up the great work!
Firebeard
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Revealer
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Enjoyed this continuation very much and the two main characters. SHaping up to be a great fantasy adventure epic!
deuxanges
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow, you really know how to leave us on a cliffhanger! Excellent narrative as always. Too bad Nella didn't have some nice sexy clothes and had to settle for a frumpy coat!
Red
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Unfair!!! Talk about a comeon cliffhanger, this is awful. Great story, beautifully written, but ends with ... well, hanging about four themes we're dying to see continued. I can't wait. Looking forward eagerly to the next chapter. Thanks, boss.
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