In the Queendom of Callantha, bigger breasts mean more magic, and more magic means more power. Two fugitives from the Queendom are seeking that power. One just wants to be free from a curse. The other wants revenge…
Chapter 1 is a teaser for the series. If the response is positive, I will upload more.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.60
- Technical: 5.00
Trevor
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very well written, very cool concept. I'm always a huge fan of these breastmancy stories and yours is a great addition to the literature. I'd love to eventually have a chapter where a real countess displays her power, but I'm really interested in seeing where this goes. I thought the BE was a little lacking, which is why I gave it a 3, but it's not all that important to have amazing smut when you have really solid world building like you've started here. Wherever you choose to go, I'm looking forward to it
Red
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Damn, great story! Needs detailed breast description, otherwise flawless. thanks!
Firebeard
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Love the concept. Very interested to see more.
fiveninethree
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love it! Definitely have me waiting for the next chapter. Wellwritten, paced it's always really great when I'm interested in the storycharacters themselves as much as the smut..
deuxanges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow, this is one of the better stories I have read recently. Good pacing not too fast or too slow, interesting characters and free of typos. There wasn't much BE, but actually that was not a problem the focus of the story development kept me reading and anticipating. The BE right at the end certainly did the job of wanting to see the next chapter!
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