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The Overflowing Bra

Gunpowder77
Suction Cups
My first ever story. Involves object breast vore.
Rileys nipples begin to suck things in and use it as fuel to grow!
Average Scores:
 Orfeo
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
Sentences are all run together. Unreadable.
 IDKWho
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3 
Not a bad start! Could use more description and character development! But I'd definitely like to encourage you to keep working on it!
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