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The Overflowing Bra

HikerAngel
Human Clay
Smarter. Sexier. More athletic. Jenny Clay has always wished she were any of those things. Instead, she is just her plain, unremarkable self.

When Jenny finds herself becoming far more gorgeous and far less intelligent, she realizes that her lecherous boss is attempting to make her into his next trophy wife. That wasn’t exactly what she had in mind when she wished to become more!

Will Jenny be able to escape Anthony’s transforming desires? Can she find a way to turn the tables on the man and become the smart, sexy, athletic woman of her own fantasies? Or will her new transformation ability give her all of those things to a degree she never imagined possible.
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