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The Overflowing Bra

CluelessSheep
Little Black Notebook 3
This is the final part of this series following Scarlet and Rick as they play even more with their friends and the little black notebook.
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Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Fun story and a nice new concept.  I like the light tone and just pure enjoyment of the sex.  So many of these stories are all tied up with revenge or domination.  Its very nice to have decent people just doing  some decent mega fucking!
Helloww
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Love your story! A great change from the usual crowd.
xyzxyzxyz
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
I liked the initial concept and the overall story, but it really shows how... experimental the whole series is. It bounces between too many concepts and mechanics and is rushed in execution, both in terms of spellinggrammar as in the actual descriptions. 
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